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Tweak says, "Never give up"

fallen_mods (fallen_mods) wrote,
@ 2007-12-20 15:25:00

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sum-solus.livejournal.com
2008-07-05 06:44 pm UTC (link)

I am so not trying to spam or anything, but HEEEEE I love the War Stories thread!!!

It's so cool to get to read the back story mentioned in the other thread. That you took the time to write it is so awesome.

Of course it's great to see Minato, but it's also great to finally meet Hitomi. And the bratlings are just too wonderful.

Swangst. Sweetness + angst. Sweengst? LOL. Whatever. I love it.

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sum-solus.livejournal.com
2008-07-07 05:35 am UTC (link)

Yeah, I'm up, and I'm reading the latest DOOM thread. It's weird, but I'm all quiet now. I feel like I should be shouting at the screen or something.

That was hideous. Not OTT, or gratuitous. But just hideous. Very well-written to make it truly hard to read, but not be OTT, you know? That was so painful.

Ryoumaryoumaryouma. And then TSUME.

And the Wolf. See, told you I wouldn't bother imagining what you'd write because it's futile to do so. What you come up with is so much more full of awesome.

Ah, you two are so brilliant.

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War stories

ashcat
2008-07-07 03:56 pm UTC (link)

Yay on War Stories :) I loved that! OMG Kakashi was so ... *KAKASHI* seemed very canon to Gaiden and I loved little Ryouma :) all crushing on his teacher and trying to do the right thing :D that he was star struck with Minato is even better :D

I *loved loved* Minato!! :D Waa dang it ladies now I want to read more from that time period :P hehehe :) I hate it ended I had hoped there'd be a little more :)

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	Dark of the Morning sum-solus.livejournal.com 2008-07-08 04:37 am UTC (link)
	LOVING this. You know, I don't want to spoil stuff for those who haven't read it. Should we not post spoilers in the guestbook? Or is it understood that there might be spoilers? So for the time being anyway, WOOT!!!! (Of course that wootness will most likely be short-lived, knowing you lot. LOL!) (Reply to this) (Thread)

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	(Anonymous) 2008-07-08 04:42 pm UTC (link)
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Art of DOOM

muffinmadness
2008-07-09 11:37 am UTC (link)

Ok, I can finally post the art I have done for the thread of DOOM.

Some of you may have noticed the icons already (the ones with the specific injuries just for the charachters). But I haven't wanted to post them untill now, as I didn't want to spoil any plots.

Here they are! (Warning: if you don't like images of blood or rot, these pictures contain both.)

Ryouma first. Here is the full size version of the image used by Ki in Ryouma's avatar.
http://picasaweb.google.com/muffinmadness/Drawings/photo#5221052155878894402

The following are close up's of the Ex-Dragon on his shoulder.
http://picasaweb.google.com/muffinmadness/Drawings/photo#5220308651507309586
http://picasaweb.google.com/muffinmadness/Drawings/photo#5220308640041579282

Now onto Tsume. This is one of the rot on her temple.

Skin tones: http://picasaweb.google.com/muffinmadness/Drawings/photo#5220308668427390354
Dead skin tones: http://picasaweb.google.com/muffinmadness/Drawings/photo#5220308703402447314

That's all for now folks!

As ever, love the writing!

Sophs

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Restlessness and Fury

ashcat
2008-07-09 09:59 pm UTC (link)

So I know I'm an idiot for reading the thread of doom when it's unfinished and Ki doesn't have inet at home right now O_O but somehow it's siren song could no longer be ignored.

And my god ppl! I am all screaming at the computer and freaking out O_O noooo Ryouma's worst nightmare used against him with his jutsu hurting a team mate O_O and omg how horrible!!! I hoped for a moment it might be a genjutsu but umm :/ doesn't look like it so far!! *WAAAA* Really fantastic writing ladies... and wow Ryouma did make a big blunder taking his amour off etc when they were still so close to the scene of he crime but just... waaa!!!

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	Nothing to hold - Haruichi ashcat 2008-07-10 10:05 am UTC (link)
	:) missed seeing you rp glad you're back! :) Great job in the thread, nice balance between urgent now thoughts and his own observations about himself! Also the scroll was a cool idea! (Reply to this) (Thread)

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Nothing to Hold

sum-solus.livejournal.com
2008-07-10 11:04 pm UTC (link)

They're still not out of the woods yet. And I'm very proud of myself for just going over what's been written, and still not trying to think ahead of you.

This whole Mission of DOOM series of threads is so awesome because there is SO much going on, but I've never felt like there's too much. I've mentioned the layers twice now, and I'll mention them again. It's just so cool how you guys write this stuff.

I love the care you take with the characters' psychology and how well you write it. You don't gloss over it, but you don't bog the writing down with it, either. Really well-done. All of you.

I got to the bottom of the page, and looked for the link to the next page of comments. Hahahhahaha. I'm so wrapped up in this, and want to see how you play this out. (Don't worry, I can be patient. Really, I can.)

Great thread. Thanks!!

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lobademibu
2008-07-11 10:25 pm UTC (link)

Whoah.

I was really happy and in a great mood earlier, and then I started reading the "Mission of Doom."

Ugh.

UGH.

UUUUGGGHHH.

Either I am a terrible crybaby who invests emotionally in what she reads waaay too much, or it is a testament to your writing skills that you have made me care about your characters enough to cry for them.

I'll finish this later, too sad for one sitting. In the mean time, I'll go emo in the corner . . .

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	(Anonymous) 2008-07-12 02:08 pm UTC (link)
	I'm trying to catch up for two weeks now and just read 'How To Lose a Life'. It is one of the most intense, darkest and best written threads I read so far. Not that the others were not awesome, too, but this one is just WOW! bows before the authors I would love to see more interaction between Kakashi and Genma. Sousha (Reply to this) (Thread)

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(Anonymous)
2008-07-14 02:02 pm UTC (link)

I just happened to stumble by here one day, clicked on a thread, and found myself hooked. I just had to go back into the archives and read everything. ^^

You guys are great - your write so well and make the characters seem so real. I probably shouldn't have started reading the latest Mission of DOOM thread, though, because now I have to keep checking to see if it's been updated, hehehe. :P

The only other thing I have to say is moar Genma and Raidou please. I really love how you guys characterized them, and they've quickly become some of my fave characters...

Rock on! ^^

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Sacred Duty

ashcat
2008-07-14 03:54 pm UTC (link)

Argh... at the end of Sacred duty and had to come comment. I'm hurting so badly for Raidou - he's beating himself up about something that didn't even happen!!! ARGH the misunderstanding! I don't know if Tsume might not leave him hanging with her intense fear of anyone finding out the truth :( argh! *cuddles Raidou & Tsume* :( poor things!

I really liked the story so far - the demon and sacrifices was an interesting plot idea :) and I was curious if it was ok by the regs to wholesale slaughter a bunch of civilians but I can see ANBU being more about a don't ask don't tell kind of thing if you are good enough not to implicate the village, then whatever...

It's really interesting to me that they'd bring the kids back to Konoha O_O

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	sum-solus.livejournal.com 2008-07-18 07:25 pm UTC (link)
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	Whee! New thread! posting from my phone cos not @ home but had to say thanks & Kakashi & Ryouma are so wonderful. :D (Reply to this) (Thread)

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	Yay! New thread! I'm glad these guys can take care of each other. Who the heck is Sano? Ryouma says "Look, Sano..." in a mental aside about Kakashi's (Obito's) tears. Did I miss something or will I find it out later? (Reply to this) (Thread)

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OMG YAY! Kakashi x Ryouma :D Fallen_Leaves!OTP

ashcat
2008-08-01 06:41 pm UTC (link)

Waaaa!!! I was so excited to see the new post that I had to drop everything and read <3 OMG It was fantastic!! I love how Ryouma seemed to strike the perfect balance with all of his warring feelings without coming off as too damaged :) and Kakashi was absolutely fantastic here! What a growth we've seen in him but it was still so ... IC feeling :) being all confused and not sure what to do but forcing himself to keep iteracting to try to keep Ryouma with him :D just YAY!

My only question I was left with was where is that nurse? Surely she didn't just let a dog that does't talk keep her away? O_o or maybe she got bit >:D

And yeah... somehow Kakashi and Ryouma have become my fallen_leaves OTP :D (Sorry Tsume!)

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OH no end of Small Hours

ashcat
2008-08-05 12:13 am UTC (link)

>_> My angst-o-meter is going crazy >_> that little line about Kakashi not lying, oh no that is definitely going to be trouble... Poor Yasuo bearer of bad news and all around getting the shaft lol!

My favorite line I think from that whole 'chapter' has to be: No genjutsu at all, but for this brief moment, his. :) OTP *swoon*

~~hey I have to wallow in it while I can who knows what havoc will be wrecked next!~~

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sum-solus.livejournal.com
2008-08-05 12:21 am UTC (link)

Are you trying to give me a heart attack???

Tousaki seemed to know what was going on; Yasuo guessed he had Kakashi-san to thank for that. It was a relief not to have to explain everything.

OMFG. I literally flailed at that. LMFAO. Guessed he had Kakashi-san to thank ahahhahahahahaa. Heeeeheheheheheheeeee oh you're so awful!!!! No, he didn't completely spill it, but what an awesome set up.

Great thread. Kakashi and Ryouma are pure love.

Have I mentioned how I LOVE the way you all work scent into things? That's so wonderful. It adds so much for me. Neato.

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aamu
2008-08-05 09:56 pm UTC (link)

*squee* An update!

O.O I wonder how long it will be before Ryouma finds out what really happened - and how he's going to react when he does. Methinks it's not going to be with happiness and unicorns (though, I'm sure how one *would* react with unicorns ^^;)I'm feeling sad for Kakashi in advance. He was only trying to protect Ryouma...

Such suspense! I can hardly wait to see how this turns out - I know you guys are going to do an awesome job. I just really love how you all write people - you manage to explore the dark bits of everyone's character without slipping down into melodramatic stereotypical angst. It's so great to read.

Rock on, yo!

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aamu
2008-08-09 06:03 pm UTC (link)

I <3 un-sober Kuromaru! He's soooooo adorable! And Ginta's reaction to him is just too great. "Want some peaches?" Hehehe.

I hope someday Kuromaru will realize Raidou's not a Bad Guy...poor Raidou, getting bit up.

You know, it never occurred to me before now to put canned fruit on toaster waffles, but dang, does it sound good. I think I'm going to have to ty that, hehe.

Such a funny story! <3

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Dreams...

ashcat
2008-08-14 09:35 am UTC (link)

Wow if that isn't an ominous new story title I don't know what is! Sheesh people!! O_O I'm so excited to see even one post lol :) and waa I like Yasuo it makes me sad to think Tsume doesn't love him :( I wonder if he loves her? at least he sounds like he's doing a good job as father and clan caretaker (is he the head of the clan now?) I can't wait to see the chaos and angst that is about to take place *dances in her seat in anticipation*

*I'm waiting to read the ginta waffles thread until it finishes :) but rather excited about it too!*

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fallen_senbon, 2008-08-18 10:09 pm UTC

Dreams - the end!

ashcat
2008-08-15 09:11 am UTC (link)

You know... I was expecting the worst here.

I was pleasantly surprised to see that mainly everyone is ok (more or less) much more than I expected though perhaps this is the calm in before the storm?

I figured Ryouma would freak out a bit more but I guess he's kinda out of energy at this point and really with your friends clinging to you it'd be hard to get too blackmood depressed given his personality :) -- I really loved it when he said "They have a scent thing..." LOL Poor ryouma they are so giving him a complex <3 heheh I still want to see a Kakashi and Tsume discussion on the exact quality of Ryouma's scent that means safe/happy whatever <3 I wonder if they perceive it the same way ? :) or is what you link scent to linked to how you perceive things as happy etc in your own head? :) Either way I was feeling much love for Ryouma :) who had his own quiet dignity and strength here :) very well done!

Tsume -- I am surprised she wasn't re-hooked up to all the machines or was I confused? I wondered what happened when Yasuo teleported her did that mean the needles in her etc just sorta vanished from her skin? (and didn't that mean she was bleeding too?) Nice job JB on keeping her herself despite the drugs and being out of it and yay for Yasuo poor guy being genjutsu'd by Kakashi was pretty evil! :( poor dude was trying to help :( I somehow think he might be a little pissed about that later >_> (heh I just snicker thinking about exhausted!kakashi + excited!inazuka clan = disaster in a hospital room hehehe)

Kakashi <3 he's gotta be past exhaustion now and witha ll the chakra pills riding the edge of almost overdosing even if he's expending it. Poor guy fell asleep in his mask again but I guess he can't really take it down since Tsume is there. I loved his reactions when he woke up how he was moving to kill before even being fully conscious :) and he forgot to bandage his own arm :( so i hope he's not bleeding too much O_O as I doubt he's letting the medics too close >_> heheh I love how utterly protective he's become in this chapter :D and how tsume gets to be pack too <3 yay! I also love that he has no idea what to say to Ryouma that's really indicative of his personality and his thoughts on "if you're not a weapon then what are you?" I loved both and I love that when he does say stuff it's not really coming out right... *snuggles kakashi!*

:) Fantastic job the Doom arc has been one of my favorites!!! :)

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ashcat, 2008-08-18 02:39 pm UTC

Re: Dreams - the end! -

fallen_kakashi, 2008-08-19 10:45 am UTC

	I am loving Winner Picks Dinner stinky-horowitz.livejournal.com 2008-08-19 08:44 am UTC (link)
	Loving it. The analogy of the mint leaves around the curry being genin guarding a stockade of enemy jounin was inspired! (Reply to this) (Thread)

Re: I am loving Winner Picks Dinner -

fallen_senbon, 2008-08-23 09:59 pm UTC

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