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Tweak says, "I am sad for I have no arms."

fallen_mods (fallen_mods) wrote,
@ 2007-12-20 15:25:00

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DOOM Aftermath . . .

lobademibu
2008-10-26 02:52 am UTC (link)

Because I'm too lazy to go back through every separate thread for details again, I'll have to do an umbrella comment. Here goes:

First let me say: teh ANGST, it kills meh . . . I LURVE IT!! XDDDD

WOW. These three are angsting enough for all of ANBU right now. But it's AWESOME. And the reason it's AWESOME is because you write it so REAL.

Like when Kakashi woke up in the hospital and his sharingan was making him see things. The way he reacts to it, and then to Ryouma. OMG. BEAUTIFUL. I'm convinced you people were war veterans in your past lives, because otherwise how would you know how to write scenes like those. It's residual memories, I'm telling you. *nods sagely*

Their argument on the roof top killed me. Oh dear bob, what fantastic characterizations you people write. I just LOVE how stubborn Ryouma is, and how he won't be pushed away. I just FRICKIN LOVE IT. *breaks out pompoms and cheers for Ryouma*

If I may backtrack, Tsume waking up really tore at my heart too. I would have thought that after waking up not only without Kuromaru in sight, but unable to feel him through their chakra bond, that she would go berserk. Instead the way she quietly just sort of, I dunno, I wanna say broke . . .

Whatever you wanna label it, JB, you killed me DED with it. *sniffles* If I may allude to my comment to Dark, SCREW YOU.

Okay the dog pile on the hospital bed? CUTENESS, LIEK WHOA. And how before that, how Kakashi was able to bring Ryouma back to himself by showing his face. UGH, BRILLIANT.

Ki, you have done such a marvelous job in dealing with Ryouma's trauma after the mission. I was afraid for some time that the new traumatized Ryouma would be impossible to reconcile with the old Ryouma I'd come to love so much. But you've found the perfect balance and fucking just AHHHHH . . . I love him even more now.

TSUME, MY LOVE!! This women delights me. I am SOOOO happy that she has no fear whatsoever of getting touched by Ryouma. Of course she wasn't the one touched in the first place. I'm dying to see how Kuromaru will react, not only because he was the one who was actually touched, but because he isn't human, so his reactions, I presume, will be different from a human's.

What else? OMG!! Tsume and Kakashi's thread!! *Dies laughing* Do you have any idea how frickin CUTE it was to read them arguing over what Ryouma smelled like? Frickin hawt sauce, that was just glee worthy.

Raidou visiting kinda surprised me, that big softy. *pokes* I liked seeing Tsume have a moment of weakness. And the way Raidou handled it was spectacular. I would not mind having him as a friend.

But most of all I loved the glimpse his visit provided into Tsume's family life. And what a tough life. OMG, I would NEVER wanna be an Inuzuka. Not when I have to worry about people trying to supersede my authority/place in the pack every time I get hurt or show some kind of weakness. That's so . . . well it's beyond my comprehension really. I can't imagine not being able to completely count on unconditional support of my family while I'm done and out. I'd go crazy it I had to deal with something like the Tanaka or Taro's behavior. UGH. *spew*

(Character limits suck worse than vacuums)

	Incident at Shi... (Genma's thread) ashcat 2008-10-26 04:33 pm UTC (link)
	oooo what an interesting look at an ANBU mission and Chuunin :) I really liked the originallity of this one! Great job Nezu :) I really enjoyed reading it! I hadn't read the Kaito/Raidou thread from a few weeks ago yet so now I have to go back and get caught up to finish it :) but thats not a hardship! :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	What Hell is Like (Anonymous) 2008-10-30 08:01 pm UTC (link)
	From Maresdrake: Exquisite. Every word is sorrow, loss. Well worth the three days you spent working on it. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	dimestore_romeo (from LJ) (Anonymous) 2008-10-31 03:27 am UTC (link)
	'Puppy of Emo Meets...' Do I remember it being said that Kaito only messes with emotions that are already there - he can't create them? If so, this is (very slightly) hilarious and also quite sad: Kakashi really does need a meltdown. <3!!!!!!!!!! (Reply to this) (Thread)