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@ 2007-12-20 15:25:00

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	Could You Bite the Hand (Anonymous) 2009-01-19 12:22 pm UTC (link)
	JAW. IN. LAP. That last line gave me shivers, and will continue to do so for the next week at least... just amazing, you two :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

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fallen_senbon, 2009-02-01 06:26 pm UTC

silvercaffiene.livejournal.com
2009-01-20 06:53 am UTC (link)

Whoa. Like, whoa. My week has gone all sparkly. When Genma searched for Raidou, everything was so... ah, lovely! His worry, and everything. The little bit about Raidou's wrist being watchless - so wonderful. It kinda spoke volumes about everything. And Raidou, when he tried to process thoughts while drunk - lovely. I dunno, but it felt so real.

And then all hell broke loose. The clashing of the Wills! The bubbling and misdirected anger! The chairs!!! And the wood! And public brawling!!! And the whole world coulda gone rainbow-ey, and they'd have just not noticed, concentrating on each other. Squee.

And...uh, Genma's poor manhood. Man, I'm a girl, and I winced. Can't imagine how he must feel. But really, even this - this low strike, was so apt, even though it coulda been hilarious, it fit the mood so well!

Seriously, I love it when those spar. Well, fight, in this case. It's always full of fun. And when Raidou, even when drunk, remembered - REMEMBERED!!! - about Genma's hands, I swear, I coulda squee-ed myself to tears.

Then the Uchiha came in!!! "Eyes like a nightmare" -- ah, even this was so perfect. Love, man, love!

And Genma - his anger! When the cop (man, you guys make uchiha sound so annoying. *amused* ) got to Raidou's face, Genma's instinctive anger spurred yet another overtly loud squee.

And when detained, the only thing on Genma's mind -- Raidou! Ah, my throat is sore! Good that he got an ice pack, though. Then he dealt with cops! Rudely!

And Raidou! The initial panic! The crawling fear! And the first person to think of! Of course, Genma! Oh gods, how much do I love interaction between these two?

Oh, and that little tidbit about Uchiha holding cells with ANBU and civillian alike? Lovely, really great. I love things like this - it all goes to making Fallen Leaves and her threads all so -blastedly- real! And really, the amount of sheer detail with these little things astounds me.

For that matter, Raidou kinda arguing with himself is really good to read. Seriously.

And they talked. And Raidou said "Genma", and friendship-that's-stronger-than-friendship was so evident, I was awed. And Raidou touched Genma's hands, and didn't get skewered, and there was all the love in the world in that gesture, as he laid Genma's scars over his own, like he was laying his life in Genma's hands - which, he probably already had.

"This wasn't about healing a flesh wound." --> This sentence moved me so much, I don't know why. It was just such a perfect description of the whole situation.

"All things considered, that was a lot better than anything he'd ever hoped for." --> My gods, and is it just me, or does this speak galleons - the whole of Wave- of Raidou's feelings, situation, life?

The trust - so huge, so huge, so beautiful! Ah, and the line of first watch. So beautiful. So significant, though only they would have known it. The weight that felt right - its all so perfect. Genma and Raidou, they really fit. And it's all the more apparent here. My, Genma patches Raidou up, Raidou patches Genma up. In their broken world, one is glad that they have each other.

I was really delighted and touched with Could You Bite The Hand? It was so... lovely. So tender, and loving, and the sheer trust those two men place upon each others shoulders; along with the weight of their pasts and nightmares - their worlds.

Seriously -- This was lovely.

-Silver

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fallen_raidou, 2009-01-26 08:24 pm UTC

(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2009-02-01 04:25 pm UTC

Hit the Mark

fallen_katsuko
2009-01-21 08:53 am UTC (link)

Ahaha...Kaito and his teenage hormones.

Quick thing that caught my attention--

One of the guards that Natsumi and Kaito attack is called "Kazuko"

The other one has an overabundance of chakra.

Like Katsuko! :D *Is totally not a complete loser whatsoever*

She probably made her way into your subconscious *nods sagely* and just popped up when you needed to write a quick OC to kill! *is triumphant at this demonstration of her awesome thinking skills*

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fallen_kotetsu, 2009-01-22 04:17 pm UTC

Rescue Me
(Anonymous)
2009-01-23 07:29 am UTC (link)

You had me on the edge the whole time, fingernails biting in tension and forgetting to leave for university. (Matter of fact I should have been gone for 15 minutes now but who cares.)
The way they both were in shock and reacting so different about it. And Hiro trying to get his dead teammates out of there also they were already dead. And Ginta mixing past and present, and... *wimpers*

I love such dark, full of tension and angst-ridden fics. And this one is excellent.

Sousha

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fallen_hiro, 2009-01-23 01:54 pm UTC

Rescue Me

fallen_ryouma
2009-01-23 11:01 am UTC (link)

Fantastic job with this thread, guys. (And, Phoenix, what a great way to introduce Hiro!) You managed to combine beautiful language with stomach-turning terror, and both Hiro and Ginta--so desperate, so determined, fighting so hard--broke my heart. I particularly loved the glimpses we saw of the other shinobi knowing they were dead men, and fighting anyway.

I kept hoping to see Yondaime come blazing to the rescue (partially because I wanted so badly for the boys to be rescued, and, okay, because I wanted to see Minata Be A Hero for the last time...) but at the end, I was really glad you hadn't chosen to go that route. You showed that the only one who could rescue Ginta was Hiro, and that Hiro had no one to save him or to rely on but himself. And we saw him do it.

Now I'm really looking forward to seeing Hiro in ANBU!

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fallen_hiro, 2009-01-23 02:09 pm UTC

fallen_ryuichi
2009-01-23 02:58 pm UTC (link)

Rescue Me

Wow. That was a kick-ass inntroduction to Hiro, and also a side of Ginta that we don't often see. It's a nice change to see him when his control is slipping. He ususally has a really tight lid on it.

I think my favorite part about it all was the use of language. For visual thinkers like me, it's fun to read things that paint a picture of the scene instead of just plain describing them.

And now I'm hoping there's going to be a follow-up thread....can I beg for one?

Playing Hero

I always love reading about Tsume, and this was a good way to introduce Asuma as well. JB, the way you describe the structure of the Inuzuka clan is facinating. Please keep it up!

Dark, I like how you write Asuma; casual, but at the same time, entirely shinobi. The detail about the beads he traded to Tsume for a meal was really cool. I'm looking forward to reading more with these two ^^

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fallen_ryuichi, 2009-01-27 10:19 am UTC

Astounded, Overwhelmed, Unhappy and Presenting Presents

muffinmadness
2009-01-24 02:16 pm UTC (link)

Astounded

I am utterly in awe of you guys. Seriously, you have flawed me! Every time I think I have reached my limit of GLEE for one year, yet another thread gets posted!

I have been dreaming of ANBU people! My sanity is fragile enough already without you infecting my dreams as well. (But I love you all the same).

Overwhelmed

So much to read, so little time. It helps that I live with Dark, but still, dudes, hats off to you. You have been working like troopers. My head may actually explode from all the updates, and I'm gonna have to invest in glasses if I end up reading anymore! *grins and wallows in a contented bliss of FL literature*

I can't write enough *squee* on the page to emphasize how much I have loved each and every update. Although to give you an idea, I live in a Victorian terrace with Dark, and she can hear me through the floor when I'm reading and squeak out loud at a thread. So yeah, I'm just utterly in love.

Unhappy

I would usually show my appreciation of all your hard work and writing at this point, by presenting to you new pickys. However, my photoshop has broken and I can't find a new copy that I can afford right now. I will keep on trying to find a copy and hopefully return with brand new pickys for you all some time soon!

Presenting Presents

My hands have not been idle however! I have been amassing a small collection of icons that I have been making using art packages and free icon making sites. I shall be constantly updating my online gallery and am presenting them to you here:

http://picasaweb.google.co.uk/muffinmadness/FLIcons

These are for you all. I have made them specifically for your use. Feel free to add, subtract or alter in any way you like, any of the collection. I'm rather bad at creating catch phrases myself, so I invite you all to do so if you so wish and add them to the base images.

So yeah, it's just a small token of my appreciation to every writer here in Leaves.

Once again, THANK YOU ALL for the squee you have added to my life!

And happy writing!

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fallen_tsume, 2009-01-25 05:02 pm UTC

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fallen_haruichi, 2009-03-16 02:05 pm UTC

	Raidou and Tsume spyralshai 2009-01-24 08:46 pm UTC (link)
	Forgive any spelling errors, I can't go back and look at the moment. But dude. They broke my heart. I'm all a-squeezy in the chest now. (Reply to this) (Thread)

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fallen_raidou, 2009-01-26 08:32 pm UTC

Kuromaru pwns, well . . . EVERYONE

lobademibu
2009-01-25 04:22 pm UTC (link)

Okay, so I've been reading things randomly, and out of order, and I don't have time to go back and re-examine each thread so I'll have to settle for a very generalized comment, but basically:

It is official. Kuromaru is my ultimate love, forever and always and no one will pwn him in the history of EVAR.

I had been missing him something fierce since he was out of commission. But it wasn't until he came back and started appearing in threads again that I realized how much I really missed him.

He is simply the best thing since tacos, and I wish I could steal him and have him here beside me forever and ever and EVAR because he's just so damn delightfully entertaining.

And he knows how to break my heart too! OMG, those threads where he's reacting badly to Ryouma. FAdflsfhgakfaf. *WAILS* Yet, he's still so intent on giving Ryouma that damn puppy plushie. jafghaqghk *WAILS SOME MORE*

I love him. He's my favorite person here, and he's not even a human person.

JB, if I knew where you lived I'd bombard your house with flowers, confetti, chocolates, and miscellaneous plushies.

The forEVAR in L♥ve with Kuro
~Loba

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fallen_tsume, 2009-01-25 05:12 pm UTC

	(Anonymous) 2009-01-26 01:56 am UTC (link)
	A very large-breasted woman who's also an archer? What? Seriously, guys? That doesn't really work out physically. Doing anything like archery with tits that huge just isn't physically plausible, ninja or no. :\| (Reply to this) (Thread)

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	One Step (Anonymous) 2009-01-26 11:44 am UTC (link)
	This quartermaster is just hilarious. And the haidresser and their ninja phobia. dies laughing As much as I enjoy the dark, evil, angst-ridden threads, something funny like this one from time to time is more than welcomed. Sousha (Reply to this) (Thread)

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fallen_asuma, 2009-01-26 08:30 pm UTC

Ibiki/Natsumi thread

fallen_tsume
2009-01-26 10:46 pm UTC (link)

Wow, guys, that Ibiki/Natsumi thread is awesome!

I love her hurt at Ibiki's lies, and Ibiki's "oh shit" moments. *grins* Also, his ships are hilarious, and the occasional glimpses of shame we get into what he does. Ouch.

Love that bit about him lying to his family, and Natsumi's disapproval--then her calling herself on it when she realizes she'll lie to her family about her shoulder. ;)

I really like the backstory between these two, and feel for both of them. Man, that'd all be hard. :P Natsumi's a lot more forgiving than i would be. ;-D And I love her twitching with the spices! And Ibiki smoothing his hair, knowing stray strands would distract her. Sign of good friends. ;-D

Well done, guys! Looking forward to more. :D

J

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fallen_natsumi, 2009-01-28 05:45 pm UTC

	Where'd everyone go? (Anonymous) 2009-01-28 05:38 pm UTC (link)
	Loved the plots centered around OCs like Gin and Ryouma (and non-OC Kakashi), but now it feels like those guys have gone away. Are there any plans to bring them back? (Reply to this) (Thread)

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(Anonymous)
2009-02-01 04:18 pm UTC (link)

I love the new Hayate Genma thread!! It's well written, and so exciting!! I enjoyed reading all the "controversial" parts from Hayate's point of view. We feel what Hayate is feeling (the nauseating feeling) and at the same time we have NO idea what's going through Genma's head as he leers at the poor little girl. Is he disconnected? Is he feeling equally sick?

I love Genma's professionalism and Hayate's rookie "freshness", loads of fun, I am dying to read part 2!

Kotszok

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	Moonlight on Masks (Anonymous) 2009-02-01 09:30 pm UTC (link)
	Hey, random question for Nezuko and Kilerkki: are you ever going to update Moonlight on Masks? Or are you guys focused solely on Fallen Leaves now? (Reply to this) (Thread)

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fallen_ryouma, 2009-02-04 01:00 pm UTC

Amazing Awesomeness!

iloveanyonebutu
2009-02-04 01:08 pm UTC (link)

Sadly this is my first comment for quite some time as I haven't been on here since November due to a serious case of real-life-itis, where I felt lucky if I managed to get three hours of sleep a night... Now that I have the wonderful commodity of free time again (it truly is wonderful) I checked back onto FL and was astounded by the amount of writing that you managed to do in three months, so I have been very happily devouring the threads, and have decided to post a sort of combo comment for all the character XD.

Asuma
I am SO happy to see that somebody finally decided to play Asuma (applauds Dark, and showers with appreciation)! I have always adored him and so to see him on FL is brilliant! Naturally I loved his threads (what with the amazing writing and all) and it was a nice change to read some light humour, not that I don't love the angst and the heartbreak - because I do, but the Asuma and Tsume (and Kuromaru) combination was so full of win, that it was out of this world.

Tsume and, of course Kuromaru
JB - how do you find the time to write so much?!
But the writing is always beyond great, so there's no way I complaining!
I'm glad that Tsume and Kuromaru are on the mend - more great missions coming up I hope - plus they'll be happier! Oh, the Raidou and Ryouma threads (what is it with Tsume and guys whose names start with 'R'?) they were just... I don't even have the words to explain I don't think... nothing really does them justice! But Tsume needs to open up, and share the angst; it's good for her, honest!

Kuromaru had me in a conundrum (fear my alliteration XP ) I'm really happy that he's better ("And definitely try crocodile. You probably won't be allergic to it." - This was CLASSIC. I fear I may be quoting it to my confused and unsuspecting friends) but on the other hand he really isn't and I'm caught between the joy and the 'awwww'!

Genma
Oh the utter brilliance of the Genma threads. I love them all. Very much. I also love Genma - but I have the feeling that he's entirely Nezuko's and far be it from me to deprive somebody of their Genma ;D! I do have to admit though that all the best Genma thread come from him and Raidou - maybe it's because he sort of opens up more? Or is a bit more 'himself' if any ninja in ANBU can be entirely 'himself'... But anyway - awesome, awesome threads!

Raidou
I have said much about Raidou in my other comments, so now I'm transferring it to here - in my opinion, Raidou makes things happen... not always the best things (drunk tank incarceration with Genma, but then quickly alleviated by the 'hands' moment... my god I loved that.) but still, things do come to light, or not as the case with Tsume may be... but yeah, as a character I think he is so important (and completely adorable, of course ;) ), just because he not only reveals things about himself, but about the other characters too, and I'm a sucker for backstories. The more the better, I think... I'm counting on you now!

Haruchi...
...is the epitome of the sarcastic, but entirely brilliant doctor. I love the sarcasm. In fact he is like my kindered spirit, and should I have ever had the urge, there is a likelihood that I would have become a doctor just because of him. And Sna's writing of course ;) .

Ryouma
There is not enough of Ryouma! Then again, there is never enough of Ryouma. However what there is, is all epic... but I want more!! Ki? Pretty please?? I would love to see more about what he's thinking at the moment, because it can't be easy, what with the Kakashi, and the Tsume, and the everything happening. Although it was great to see him in 'Weight of the World' I really enjoyed it - I always think that meeting new characters is really intersting, especially with your writing!

Hayate, Kotetsu, Hiro, Natsumi, Katsuko, Ryuichi, Kaito, Ginta, Ibiki and Kakashi, I haven't forgotten you - I promise, I will write comments on you tomorrow! As sadly real-life strikes again and this is all I have time for today!